My husband has a cold. The house reeks of eucalyptus, the
bins are full of tissues, and the air is loud with complaint. My sympathy of
Day One has eroded into the irritation of Day Four, and it’s only a matter of
time before I say, ‘Well, you’re not actually dying, are you?’
But of course that’s a modern luxury, and a hundred years ago I
wouldn’t have dared say it. A ‘chill’ can lead to bronchitis, pleurisy, or pneumonia,
and in the days before antibiotics these were often fatal. It might even
be the precursor to influenza – and the pandemic of 1918-1920 killed between
3-5% of the entire world’s population. A mere cough could be the first sign of ‘consumption’,
‘phthisis’, ‘scrofula’, ‘Pott's disease’, or the ‘White Plague’ – the global
killer we’ve now learned to call ‘tuberculosis’. Everyone knows that if a
character in a historical drama is seen to cough, then the next scene is going
to be a funeral.
'At Rest': The death of Little Nell in 'The Old Curiosity Shop' by George Cattermole |
We still fear some of these things. TB is making a comeback,
pandemics are always good for newspaper sales, and we are once again being
advised to take precautions our grandparents took for granted. Yet the fact we
need to be told to cover our mouths when we cough shows the astonishing degree
of our modern complacency. The miracles of modern medicine have stripped away so many
of our natural fears that we’ve come to see science as a shield against death
itself.
But when we write historical fiction that shield has to be
the first thing to go. There’s obviously huge variation in place and period,
but awareness of sickness and mortality colours every one of them, and our
characters can’t but share in it. How can they do otherwise when they’re seeing
it every day?
'The Beggars' by Brueghal the Elder |
And really they would be. There’ve been sick beggars on the
streets since before even Roman times, and as late as the 17th century it was
impossible to walk the length of the Champs Elysée and remain ignorant of the
reality of blindness, paralysis, lameness, dropsy, or even disfiguring cancers.
Nor was visible sickness restricted to the poor. Smallpox struck kings as well
as paupers, and even Elizabeth I bore the scars of it on her face and hands as
evidence that she had faced death and survived. Almost equally prevalent
(especially in mainland Europe) were the terrible signs of syphilis, on which
many medieval church gargoyles are deliberately modelled to show the deadly
wages of sin.
Smallpox victim 1911 Illinois Bust of tertiary syphilis |
But syphilis didn’t end in medieval times, and neither did
most of these other horrors. Fast forward to the civilization of Victorian
England and we can laugh at the grotesque minor characters populating Dickens’
novels – but the truth is that he was largely describing what he saw. Some deformities
were caused by accidents or war wounds – eye-patches, wooden legs, and hooks
for hands – but many others are immediately recognizable to doctors as the
result of childhood illness or malnutrition.
'The Internal Economy of Dotheboys Hall' from 'Nicholas Nickleby' by Phiz |
Goitres were a consequence of iodine
deficiency, ‘hunchback’ is kyphosis, often caused by poor childhood nutrition, bandy
legs were a sign of rickets, while ‘cripples’ with atrophied limbs were
probably victims of polio. Many of these conditions are still with us in the
poorer countries, and when we look at those heartbreaking photographs of
children with cleft lips and palates it’s hard to believe that not very long
ago we’d have seen these in London too.
All these things are an essential part of the ‘historical
world’, and we often have enormous fun writing them. With In the Name of the
King I was delighted to find the real character of Fontrailles was genuinely a
‘hunchback’, and only wish I’d had the space to develop the ways in which that
affected his personality. I also took a hideously writerly pleasure in basing
my fictional Comte de Vallon on a real-life syphilitic nobleman whose return to
society was eased by Louis XIV requesting his courtiers ‘not to notice his
having no nose.’ Anything out of the ordinary is grist to a novelist’s mill,
and I was going to grind it all I could.
But sometimes it’s in the 'ordinary' that the real gold is
buried. We can write historical novels where nobody gets ill at all, and yet
the characters will still have been shaped by a world in which these things
happen. Their perception of cruelty will be different, their ideas of fairness,
even their concept of religion, and they will be constantly aware of their own
mortality. Dreadful as they were, the hunchbacks and crooked legs were tokens
of those who had survived, and served as a terrible reminder of the many who
did not.
People could and did die of the most minor things, and the
fact they were so imperfectly understood only added to the sense of a random
destiny that could strike at any time. This 1665 Bill of Mortality raises far
more questions than it answers, and while ‘sore legge’ might be tetanus, for
instance, what are we to make of medical causes of death listed as ‘Bedridden’,
‘Suddenly’, or even ‘Grief’? Yet the one that brings home to me most powerfully
the reality of the pre-antibiotic world is described in that ominously single
word – ‘Teeth’.
And of course we have to show this awareness in our writing. We
can’t have characters say modestly ‘It’s just a scratch’ when everyone would
have known that a scratch could kill. We can’t even give them a quick bout of
toothache and then forget about it. Ridiculous as it is, we even have to let most
of our characters believe it’s possible to die of a broken heart.
But the risk that would have affected most people sooner or
later is that of pregnancy, and we can’t ever take that lightly. Even
today we know of the risks of miscarriage, and many couples won’t officially
announce a pregnancy until the first three months are safely passed – but in
the case of Louis XIV’s brother Philippe, the Queen was never acknowledged to
have even been pregnant until the child was born and had stayed alive a full
calendar month.
Madame de Sevigne by Lefebvre |
The risk to the mother was almost as great, as we see in
that figure of 23 childbed deaths in a week. In 1671 the famous French
letter-writer Madame de Sévigné began a letter to her married daughter in this
rather cryptic fashion:
'Today is the sixth of March. I beg you to tell me how you
are. If you are well, you are ill, but if you are ill, then you are well. I
hope, my child that you are ill, so that you will be in good health for at
least some time to come.’
The mystery is clear once we realize the daughter was
due to menstruate, and what her mother feared more than anything
was another pregnancy.
But what I actually find most fascinating about that letter
is the way phrases we now use as mere formulae had real meaning in the past. ‘Tell
me how you are’ is not the standard ‘How are you?’ with which we greet each
other today, usually hoping we won’t be told the answer. Those of us over a
certain age still tend to begin letters with the polite ‘I hope you’re well’,
but this has already come to signify a broader enquiry in which health plays little
part.
1864 Civil War letter with standard opening |
It was different in the 19th century. I included a letter in Into the Valley of Death which began with the then-standard phrase ‘I hope
this finds you well as it leaves me’, but it wasn’t until a reader asked me
about it that I began to see its real significance. Outside London, a letter
could take days to reach the recipient, and the writer’s awareness of time
reveals a very real concern for the risk of ill-health. The most they’ll commit
to is ‘I’m well at the time of writing’, because they know perfectly well that
in a week or so they may not be. This seems strange in a time when even the most
deadly disease usually gives the sufferer at least a few more months
of life – but in 1854 a man who wrote ‘I am well’ on Monday could be dead by
Friday. It’s true the phrase is a standard one and would often have been used
without conscious thought, but behind it is a mindset that knows the sword of
Damocles can fall at any minute.
And this one phrase exemplifies two of the things I love most
about writing historical fiction. The first is the everyday reality of a bygone
world, which can give us not only great texture but also the kind of plot
development unthinkable in a contemporary work.
My favourite example is in Pride and Prejudice, where Jane Bennet
walks in the rain to a dinner with two desirable bachelors, and quickly develops
a cold which makes her return impossible. The house is only three miles away
from her own home, but she is of course too ill to be moved, and in such a
condition that requires her equally marriageable sister Lizzy to come and
attend her.
This is brilliant. True, if Jane’s cold had been anything like my husband’s then her
hosts would have bundled her out of the house in two minutes flat, but if we
assume the phlegmier stages were passed invisibly in the bedroom, then the plot
mechanics are perfect – and I challenge anyone to devise a contemporary
narrative which would achieve such a result.
But, as usual with Austen, there’s
far more going on here than plot. Jane’s mother deliberately sent her daughter
out in the rain in the hope of engineering this very situation, and Mr
Bennet is only half-joking when he hopes she’ll find it a comfort if her daughter dies following her
orders. Austen is of course writing about her own time, but she uses those perceptions to create both story and character unique to that age, and I'd love to be able to emulate her.
But the second aspect I love is the Sword of Damocles
itself, and the way in which awareness of death gives an extraordinary
intensity to life. Our own lives are too safe to imagine it easily, but I’ve
found the most useful comparison is to wartime. When living through war we’re
all at once back in a time when life is cheap, death can strike without
warning, and the only moment there might ever be is now. We might normally find
incomprehensible the religious fervour of bygone ages, but even an atheist
prays when the house they’re sitting in is being bombed. We might laugh at the
superstition of the past, but from verbal rituals to ‘lucky socks’, you’ll find
no people more superstitious than soldiers in even a modern war.
Everything is more concentrated and intense. The friendship forged
between men who face death together is far deeper than that between those who
use the same coffee machine, and when time is short, then love and passion soar as never before. And people take risks. Mad, exhilarating, even
heroic risks – because there is so little to lose. Live through war, and we
begin to understand some of the heroic lunacy of even sixteenth century
peacetime, when men and women risked their lives for power, for politics, for
religion, and for love.
It's no coincidence that the most passionate romances are often set in war |
I write war in my novels anyway, but I’d still want to study
it for the insight it can give us into the past. War is a magic door that can
take me right back in time, to a world where death lurks round every corner - and where there are far worse things to deal with than my husband’s cold.
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Well, OK, I am A L Berridge really, just filling in a gap in the schedule. And I hope you noticed I didn't mention Crimea even once...
Lovely post, Louise! And now you mention it, Jane's illness in Prde And Prejudice is no doubt worse than if she merely caught a cold in our time. Though her mother, as I recall, sent her out by horse instead of in the carriage because it was going to rain and she hoped Jane would be invited to stay the night. I don't think she was expecting her to get sick.
ReplyDeleteYour mention of the background that is implied in any piece of historical fiction, the underlying assumptions, makes me glad I have ony written a small amount of the stuff. Too difficult! :-) When I was researching my Dr Barry story, I had two choices of the reasons for her death that have been given, a chill and cholera. I opted for the cholera because it gave a good reason for the necessity of ignoring her request to be buried in whatever clothes she had died in, but reading this makes me realise just how easily she could have died of that chill.
Fascinating and thought-provoking post. Really enjoyed reading it, thanks!
ReplyDeleteExcellent post! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteWonderful post - and so true. It makes me thing of the Bastable children's cold cure (Dicky makes every effort to catch a cold in P&P style, and three days later Noel is sneezing).
ReplyDeleteMost apposite! I am recovering from just such a cold as your husband's and I take them VERY seriously as in the past they have led to chest infections, bronchitis and pneumonia. But then I was born with bronchitis and my mother had to have kettles steaming in the bedroom so that I could breathe. So a life-long weakness.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if it makes me think more like Jane Austen when I write novels?
Currently writing about characters in Shakespeare's London, where life expectancy for a man averaged 29 years. Marlowe was spot on.
Thanks for making a Frank Sinatra type absolutely last return performance!
Brain fever! People in the 19th century were always getting brain fever (Sara Crewe's papa, for instance) and usually they died of it.
ReplyDeleteWell, encephalitis is still quite a danger! I remember my daughter had a friend in Hong Kong, when we lived there whose mother had died of it, a dreadful tragedy. It's one of the glaring wrong notes only very occasionally struck by Georgette Heyer, that she belittles illnesses such as measles as 'childish' yet 3 generations of the French royal family were wiped out by it in the 17th century and it was far from harmless in Regency times. Then there was Prince Albert, killed by typhoid. As you say, those things add up to a completely different way of living.. Though average age of death does not mean that people all died young!
ReplyDeleteFascinating, thank you. I was always gung-ho about coughs and colds until getting pneumonia - my grandmother's reaction was interesting (she had lost siblings to pneumonia, diptheria etc). If antibiotics are becoming less effective we could see a return to older times. Love the comment about the nose.
ReplyDeleteDidn't mention Crimea? Well not directly but obliquely in that your book is set in Crimea. How's that for splitting hairs Louise?
ReplyDeleteWhat has always fascinated and appalled me in equal measure is the horrific rate of non-battle deaths and sickness. When you look at Regimental roll call sheets and campaign reports, there is almost always a 3:1 ratio in favour of sickness over battle.